The Coach Who Stopped Screaming
Coach Davis was a screamer.
Not all the time. During games, in front of parents, he was encouraging, enthusiastic, everything you'd want. The parents loved him. He won trophies. He genuinely cared about the kids — you could see it in how he celebrated their goals, how he remembered their birthdays, how he stayed late to help stragglers with their footwork.
But practice was different.
Behind closed doors, with no parents watching, Coach Davis believed pressure made diamonds. He'd stand inches from a twelve-year-old's face and scream. He called kids "pathetic" when they missed a play. He made the kid who botched a shot run laps until they threw up. He benched players for "attitude" when the attitude was crying after being humiliated.
He wasn't evil. He thought this was coaching. He thought this was how you build winners. He'd been coached this way himself, and he turned out fine — so what's the problem?
The problem was the kids who went home different after practice. The ones who stopped loving the sport. The ones whose parents heard complaints at the dinner table but weren't sure what to do — because Coach Davis was otherwise a great coach, a great person, and he loved those children.
Nobody did anything. Because Coach Davis won games. Because the league liked him. Because the other parents were afraid their kid would get benched if they spoke up. Because that's how it's always been done.
Then the Marquez family showed up.
The Safety Officer Who Got Caught Off Guard
Dante Marquez was twelve and he'd played travel soccer since he was seven. He loved the game. He was good at it. And he'd taken the 4 LAWS Youth Course six months earlier — he knew his rights, he knew the enforcement tools, he was a trained Safety Officer.
Three practices in, Coach Davis got in his face after a missed pass. Screaming. Inches away. The kind of explosion that freezes you no matter how much training you have.
Dante tried what he knew — the respect filter. He tried to make the screaming invisible. Power off. But this wasn't disrespect from a kid in the hallway. This was an authority figure violating his Law of Limits — physical space invaded, emotional safety destroyed — and it caught him off guard. The training was there. The situation was bigger than what he'd practiced for.
He came home different. Quiet. Didn't want to talk about practice. Started saying his stomach hurt on training days.
His mother Carmen asked what was wrong. Dante didn't want to say — because Coach Davis had a rule: "What happens at practice stays at practice."
Carmen knew that line. Any adult who tells a child to keep secrets about how they're being treated is crossing the line. That's not coaching. That's control.
But Carmen didn't storm the field. She didn't write an angry email at midnight. She sat down with Dante and they opened the 4 LAWS system together — the page they'd studied before: How to Know What to Do.
They identified two violations running at the same time. The screaming and intimidation was a Type 1: Open Violation — the system said use protective force, stop it immediately. But stopping it immediately meant pulling Dante off the team. Physical separation. That protects the kid but doesn't solve the problem for every other child still on that field.
The second violation was deeper. "What happens at practice stays at practice." That's a Type 2: Secret Violation. Secrecy. An adult demanding silence about how children are being treated. And the system had a specific strategy for Type 2 — counter secrecy with secrecy.
Carmen looked at Dante and gave him the choice.
"Here's what we can do. Option one — we treat this as a Type 1 violation. I pull you off the team right now. You're safe. It's over. No shame in that."
Dante listened.
"Option two — we treat the secrecy as a Type 2 violation. You go back to practice. But you're not going back as a victim. You're going back as a Safety Officer gathering intelligence. You document everything. Dates. Times. What he says. Who's there. We build a case. And when we have enough, we expose it — not just for you, but for every kid on that team."
Dante thought about it. Then he said: "I want to go back."
Carmen made sure he understood. "This means four more weeks of practice with a coach who screams. You'll have a job to do while he's in your face. Are you sure?"
"He does it to all of us. If I just leave, nothing changes for them."
That's the moment a twelve-year-old became a Safety Officer. Not because his mom told him to. Because he chose it.
The counter-secrecy strategy:
Step 1: Act like you believe them. Dante kept going to practice like nothing changed. Step 2: Let them walk deeper. Coach kept screaming because he thought nobody was watching and nobody was writing it down. Step 3: Expose with evidence. The binder. Step 4: Offer the choice. The families let Coach Davis decide what to change — keep the old way and lose trust, or choose a new way and earn it back.
Every practice was intelligence gathering. Every incident went into the file. Dante had a job now — and the job gave him power the screaming had taken away.
The Documentation
Carmen and Dante built the file together. Methodical. Factual. No emotion. Just evidence.
Date. Time. What was said. Who was present. Dante's observations from the field. Carmen's notes from what Dante reported at home. Written down after every practice.
They did this for four weeks. Not because Dante was suffering in silence — because he was building a case. He knew what he was doing and why. The stomachaches stopped after the first week. The mission replaced the fear.
The Letter
When Carmen had enough documentation to show a pattern — not a bad day, not a tough practice, a pattern — she wrote a letter. Not to the coach. To the league director.
The letter was one page. It said:
Our family follows the 4 LAWS of Trust and Talent. The Law of Limits protects every child's right to feel safe — physically and emotionally. The Law of Respect requires that every person be spoken to with dignity, regardless of age or authority.
The attached documentation shows a pattern of behavior by Coach Davis that violates both laws. Our son has the right to play the sport he loves without being humiliated, threatened, or silenced.
We are requesting a meeting to address this. We expect a resolution within fourteen days.
This letter and all documentation have been copied and shared with three other families on the team who have independently reported similar concerns.
Carmen signed it. Her husband signed it. Dante signed it.
The Domino
Here's what Carmen did that changed everything: before she sent the letter, she talked to the other parents. The ones who'd been whispering in the parking lot. The ones who'd been shaking their heads.
She didn't ask them to complain. She asked them one question: "Has your child come home upset after practice?"
Every single one said yes.
She asked a second question: "Would you be willing to put that in writing?"
Three families said yes. Three separate letters. Three separate sets of documentation. All saying the same thing: our children don't feel safe, and we have evidence.
One parent complaining is a "difficult parent." Four parents with documentation is a crisis the league can't ignore.
The Meeting
The league director called the meeting within a week. Coach Davis sat across from four families and a stack of documented incidents he didn't know existed.
He started with the usual defenses. "I'm tough because I care." "These kids need to be pushed." "This is competitive sports, not daycare."
Carmen didn't argue with him. She just pointed to the documentation.
"On October 3rd, you stood three inches from a twelve-year-old's face and screamed at him for a missed pass. On October 10th, you made a child run until he vomited as punishment for a missed goal. On October 17th, you told my son that what happens at practice stays at practice."
She looked at the league director. "This isn't toughness. This is a pattern."
Then something happened that nobody expected.
Coach Davis looked at those documents the way you look at your own face in a mirror when you've been avoiding mirrors. Page after page. Dates. Quotes. His words, written down by children and repeated by their parents. The cumulative weight of it — not one bad day but weeks of a pattern he'd never seen from the outside.
His eyes got wet. He closed the binder. And he said: "I owe these kids an apology."
Not because the league told him to. Not because he was facing consequences. Because he saw it. For the first time, he saw what he was doing through the eyes of the children receiving it — and it broke something open in him.
He offered a formal apology to every child on the team. In person. In front of their parents.
The Marquez family — and the three families who'd joined them — did something remarkable. They asked the league NOT to sanction Coach Davis. Instead, they asked the league to let Coach Davis decide for himself what he could do differently.
That's the 4 LAWS in their purest form. Not punishment. Not destruction. Accountability that leads to chosen change. The same principle they were teaching their children — forced goodness doesn't last. Chosen goodness transforms.
What Happened Next
Coach Davis didn't become a different person overnight. Old habits take time. But the pattern broke — because now he could see it.
He asked Carmen for a copy of the documentation. He read it twice. He started catching himself mid-sentence at practice — hearing the echo of his own words on those pages.
The league implemented a coaching code of conduct. A parent liaison was assigned to attend practices. And the "what happens at practice stays at practice" policy was eliminated — publicly, in writing, to every family on the team.
Six months later, Dante told his mom something that made her cry.
"Coach actually said 'nice work' to me today. Like, for real. And he meant it."
That's what accountability sounds like when it comes from the inside — not because someone forced the change, but because the evidence made it impossible to keep pretending.
What the Marquez Family Did Right
They used the system. Dante had the training. Carmen had the framework. When the violation happened, they didn't react — they opened the 4 LAWS, identified it as a Type 1 Open Violation, and chose the documentation path. The system told them what to do. They did it.
They turned Dante from victim to officer. The moment Dante had a mission — gathering intelligence, building the case — the stomachaches stopped. He wasn't enduring practice. He was working it. That shift matters more than most people realize.
They didn't go alone. One family complaining is a nuisance. Four families with matching documentation is undeniable. Carmen built a coalition before she built a case.
They went to the right person. Not the coach — he's the problem, not the solution. The league director has the authority to act. Always go to the person who has the power to change the situation.
They gave a deadline. "We expect a resolution within fourteen days." Not aggressive. Not threatening. Just clear. Without a timeline, concerns get filed and forgotten.
They chose restoration over punishment. When Coach Davis broke open and offered a genuine apology, the families didn't pile on. They asked the league to let HIM decide what to change. That's the 4 LAWS at their deepest — not forced goodness, but creating the conditions for chosen goodness. The same thing they teach their children.
The 4 LAWS in Action
The Law of Limits — Two violations running simultaneously. The screaming was Type 1 — open, visible, undeniable. The demand for secrecy was Type 2 — hidden, controlling, designed to keep the open violation invisible. Dante and Carmen used the Type 2 counter-secrecy strategy because the Type 1 response — protective force, physical separation — would have pulled Dante off the team without changing anything for the kids left behind. Counter-secrecy protected Dante AND built the case that protected everyone.
The Law of Responsibility — Carmen and Dante didn't just complain. They identified the violation type, built a case over four weeks, recruited three families, wrote a formal letter, and gave a deadline. They earned the outcome through preparation, not emotion. And when Coach Davis broke open, they chose restoration over punishment — compensating for the harm by giving the coach a chance to make it right himself.
The Law of Respect — The letter didn't insult Coach Davis. It didn't call him names. It stated facts and requested dignity — for Dante and for every kid on the team. And when the coach apologized, the families gave him the respect of letting him choose his own path forward. Respect was both the demand and the method.
The Law of Talent — Dante loves soccer. His pearl burns on that field. The 4 LAWS exist to protect that fire from anyone who would use authority to smother it — even a coach who thought he was helping. Dante is still playing. The fire is still burning. And now it's protected.
Your Move
If your child suddenly stops wanting to go to an activity they used to love — practice makes them sick, they don't want to talk about it, the fire went out for no reason you can see — pay attention. That's a signal.
Ask them: "How does your coach talk to you when parents aren't around?"
Listen to the answer. Not just the words — the body language. The hesitation. The "it's fine" that doesn't sound fine.
If something's wrong, don't react. Open the 4 LAWS system with your child. Identify the violation type together. Decide together — Type 1 and walk away, or Type 2 and build the case. Document. Get dates. Get specifics. Talk to other parents. Then put it in writing and send it to the person with the power to change it.
Your child has the right to love their sport AND feel safe playing it. Those two things are not in conflict — no matter what any coach tells you.
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Dr. Eduardo M. Bustamante is a Licensed Clinical Psychologist (MA PSY3644) with 35+ years of experience specializing in children's behavioral health. He is the creator of the 4 LAWS of Trust and Talent and founder of 4 LAWS Academy. Learn more at 4lawsacademy.com.